Part 1 Draft informative essay

In this activity, you will write your draft and share it in this discussion forum.  All students will share and have the opportunity to learn from each other.  As part of this reflective, shared learning, your teacher will guide the discussion pulling out overall insights, feedback, and drafts.  Everyone is expected to be positive and respectful, with comments that help all learners write effectively.  

You are required to provide  positive  feedback on one of your classmates’ rough drafts. You might state that you liked the description of an event, or admire the person who wrote about their experience.  ( Note : Your minimum requirement is to comment on ONE other classmate’s post. However, if you’ve been inspired or want to further your learning feel free to engage in several posts with your classmates.)

Important Note: Please submit your own original work. Do not copy discussion posts or work from your classmates. That is plagiarism and will result in a failure. You will not be able to see other posts until you submit your own post.